Too freaking busy overall. Maybe you can do something about the transitions? You need something to pull the montages together.
Gordon's,
Bottom center picture and bottom right look great. Very dynamic, real sense of movement.
Top left, is he trying to mate with a smurf?
Top center and top left look to posed. If you are going to have posed shot, have a posed shot.
Bottom right, I don't know looks like he is about to hurt himself.
Font, gayest ever. Cripes, it's a sports montage. Not an invitation to here is pan-flute recital at the Conservatoir.
Reily's
Let's look at the same two shots from a billion angles.....no.
But at least he's got good lettering.
