^-- what he said. Better, but still needs teaking.
A minor point, but a highly visible one:
Looking at the photo of the men stepping down from (or is it "up to?") the plane, you can see the darker color by the canopy, and a lighter shade by the cowling/MGs.
It's got grey/grey on the wings, it would have a continuation of this camo on the upper surfaces. The same shades. It would follow basic patterns along the spine, but with 2 colors (rarely ever solid grey, just from what I've seen)