Here are some suggestions:
1. Don't use music making references to sex. Soundtracks are preferred.
2. Try not to get the mouse into the recorded film.
3. Try to get some more camera angles on your kills. We mainly saw internal views of all your kills. Show us some external views from under the wing, next to a gun, at the nose, gun-cam, behind the canopy, etc... Simply mix up the camera angles to increase the excitement of your film a little.
That's all I can come up with right now. Mainly because of the startling reference towards bed time in your film's music. The only part I could really focus on was your proud kill of VansCrew. Nice job!:cool: