ok 1st off goodjob on your first film, are you using WMM?
suggestions:
Vid quality, its horrid....can be fixed when rendering your film. in WMM i believe when you hit save to my computer you can make customized rendering settings, Max it out. your films will be easier to watch if its not all pixilated.
Experiment with different shots(i wish someone woulda told me this when i started making films) and try to keep the shots short i try to keep mine from 4seconds to 20seconds. This will make the action come faster(which most people that watch these like to see) Im just starting to get good at putting shots together and make it look almost good.
Dont give up the more you play with it the better you will get, your 1st film looks like mine did(i wish i still had it i would post it).
If you have any questions i usually check this board 4-5 times aday and will be happy to answer any questions you may have.
