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Offline angelsandair

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Wow, this is good
« on: April 02, 2008, 11:18:01 PM »
http://s253.photobucket.com/albums/hh71/1pLUs44/?action=view&current=SavingPrivateRyan.flv

Check out the video I made. (it may as well be a preview, I threw it together in about an hour only using half the song)

Give me some feedback on how you think the video is.
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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #1 on: April 03, 2008, 05:15:25 PM »
no feedback?
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Goto Google and type in "French military victories", then hit "I'm feeling lucky".
Here lie these men on this sun scoured atoll,
The wind for their watcher, the wave for their shroud,
Where palm and pandanus shall whisper forever,
A requiem fitting for heroes

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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #2 on: April 03, 2008, 05:42:45 PM »
want attention?
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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #3 on: April 03, 2008, 08:22:36 PM »
it ok i guess, song reminds me og savingprivate ryan
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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #4 on: April 03, 2008, 10:28:43 PM »
thats the thing, but I wanna see what people actually think about it, see if it's too jerky with the camera shots.. etc. Thats why I'm using photobucket instead of something like mediafire.  :aok
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Goto Google and type in "French military victories", then hit "I'm feeling lucky".
Here lie these men on this sun scoured atoll,
The wind for their watcher, the wave for their shroud,
Where palm and pandanus shall whisper forever,
A requiem fitting for heroes

Offline BMathis

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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #5 on: April 04, 2008, 02:25:00 AM »
Tooting your own horn with that title isn't the greatest of ideas... [To be frank] It sounds a bit arrogant.

Good song, but your film is not telling a story. With a song like that, you should try to focus on a story line. It will help give your audience a sence of what you're trying to portray.


Change the Thread title next time... you threw this together in an hour, with half a song... Do you think "Wow, this is good"?

I'm just being honest angel, impression management is something I know a little bit about. If you cross the preverbial line in something as simple as a title that contradicts your entire thread (movie), nobody is gonna give you the time of day.

Keep working at it bud, you'll only get better.



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Wow, it must be late. Sorry to be so blunt, no offense ofcourse.
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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #6 on: April 04, 2008, 05:04:29 PM »
oh no, its just a quick one I threw together, but I was suprised on how good it was. I'm remaking it with the whole song.  I'm working on it right now, so far I've spent about a day and a half on it finding the right stuff and recording things in the MA and the DA.
It's gonna probably take about a week. The entire song is like 7 minutes long. But I may use The Patriot's theme song.  :salute

P.S. Anyone else think the camera shots were a bit too jerky?


and Bmathis, with the "wow this is good" I personally really like it. I just need to add things to it. thats all.
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Goto Google and type in "French military victories", then hit "I'm feeling lucky".
Here lie these men on this sun scoured atoll,
The wind for their watcher, the wave for their shroud,
Where palm and pandanus shall whisper forever,
A requiem fitting for heroes

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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #7 on: April 04, 2008, 05:36:46 PM »
yeah a bit jerky in some parts
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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #8 on: April 04, 2008, 06:00:39 PM »
That's what I was thinking. I've been slowing it down a bit on the full version. It's gonna be good.
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Goto Google and type in "French military victories", then hit "I'm feeling lucky".
Here lie these men on this sun scoured atoll,
The wind for their watcher, the wave for their shroud,
Where palm and pandanus shall whisper forever,
A requiem fitting for heroes

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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #9 on: April 05, 2008, 02:49:21 AM »
P.S. I'm about to finish the real thing I got great film from H338 and CMustard. (Srry what I said to ya mustard, you just shouldn't be disrespecting any friend of mine like that  :salute )
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Goto Google and type in "French military victories", then hit "I'm feeling lucky".
Here lie these men on this sun scoured atoll,
The wind for their watcher, the wave for their shroud,
Where palm and pandanus shall whisper forever,
A requiem fitting for heroes

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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #10 on: April 07, 2008, 10:15:55 PM »
Quote from: zoozoo on April 03, 2008, 05:42:45 PM
want attention?

of all people, you should say that.
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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #11 on: April 08, 2008, 12:02:47 PM »
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Re: Wow, this is good
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Re: Wow, this is good
« Reply #14 on: April 09, 2008, 12:02:30 PM »
Quote from: zoozoo on April 04, 2008, 05:36:46 PM
yeah a bit jerky in some parts

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