Could have had some more close up shots, would suggest useing "Camera Shots" in AH film veiwer more. Music was great and really liked how you had color changes on some of the shots, I really like the footage taken from the gun site. I have found that slowing the film down to about 1/4 and zooming in on site so it fills the screen completely makes for some really good clips, couple that with your use of changeing back ground color and it would be a really cool shot.
overall I liked the idea's i think you could work on more close up veiws of chase and targut planes, Camara shots in film veiwer are awsum once you get the hang of them.
Good work tho, look forward to seeing the finished product.
Don