It could definitely be better.
Please remember that its a film, not an essay. So please don't repeat film from a few minutes ago, makes it seem as if you had nothing original and just wanted to slap something together for bragging purposes. You were also having some trouble on camera angles and views. A lot of that footage had the wrong camera angle and was zoomed in to such an extent that you never saw your opponent until they were headed for the deck. Those shots would be prime candidates for a, "set up camera shots" moment.
The following is just a suggestion, not necessary. You might consider adding sound effects for guns firing, bullets hitting their mark, parts of planes ripping apart, and explosions.
As for video quality and frame rates, great job! The rest could use some work.
