Not a bad film... But I completely agree with Denholm. Take the time to explore your shots, you may be rushing things and getting stuck in a rut, and moving on with the film too quickly. I do this all the time.
Also try watching this without the music. Does it still entice your visual attention? IMO it did not... Music isn't everything, but is the icing on the proverbial cake. Filming is the key to a great movie, storyline keeps your audience involved, and music is that delectable treat... Get em all right, and you'll have your audience begging for more.
Just my opinion champ, keep em coming...
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