Brilliant! Bravo! Excellent! Superb!
It was amazing, the splendor of the vibrations of those strings in the domed building making that sophisticated echo. Absolutely lovely. However I would recommend that the composer bring in some more Cellos, Clarinets, Flutes, Trombones, a Tuba, and a drum, for the deep dark mystical feel of awe.
Oh... I'm supposed to review the film? Dang it....
Not bad, you have a hang on it. You have an idea of what you want to do, and where you want to go with it. I did see some area of concern, though. The main concern was lighting. This may simply be from your editor, Adobe Premier. However the forest tiles of the terrain were very dark in your film, and whenever an aircraft flew into such a region it was difficult to see them on the film. So make sure you have enough light in the film for the viewer to decipher what is going on.
The next thing you might want to work on, zoom levels. I do realize that using chase view and zooming at the same time is nearly impossible, so keep this one in mind for when you start working with camera angles. Anyways, the film becomes more personal for the viewer when you zoom in and show them what's going on with you, and your opponent. In this I'm saying that the viewer should always be able to see your opponent when you're in a fight and what you're doing to light his tail on fire. There are multiple things you can do with camera angles, you simply have to know how to choreograph it properly to give the proper amount of spice to the user.
The last part you should work on is adding sound effects to your film, it adds that extra factor of immersion that us viewers can't resist to bathe ourselves in.
Not bad for a start! You have the will power and the potential, all you have to do is seize the opportunity to make something great.
