I like your choice of subject (Macchi, baby!!), and the music wasn't bad either.
I think it could have used a little improvement. Small things, like, instead of reading "the me110 breaks up over town" -- show us the 110 breaking up over town.
Overall, not bad.
I'm curious about your convergence, though. Seems the tracers are crossing before they get near the target. Could be set too close. Or could be the old optical illusion that tracer streams seem to create.