The composition was okay, but the story: flying lancs like a dweeb, irks me. Diving so fast and zoom climbing so hard you're about to lose your drones is ultra lame in my book. Shows a flaw in the flight model that this is possible.
Other than that, the only major thing I'd request is some game sounds underneath the music. They don't have to be too loud, but guns, hits, engines, explosions, etc, all lend a subtle flavor to a video, even if your main focus is the sound track.
I really liked the internal bomb bay shot, btw. Cool idea.