I think your initial concept was good with the story line. I enjoyed the music selection. A few of the external shots were a bit too far away but most were good. You're still using fraps and its still producing jerky video and like I always say, it really takes away from your video. I know you shot the dogfight in the dueling arena because it was pretty obviously with the wide open flat land. I try and film stuff were the terrain adds something to the fight, especially if its down low. I'm sure you did it in the dueling arena so you could get an actual 1v1 fight w/o and interuption, but I think a better idea would have been to take it to the Mid War Arena and find some bases where there wasn't a fight.
