For me its hard to read, but that could be the picture you have posted. It's better to upload to your web site and post the link so everyone can see what its meant to look like.
Also, believe it od not white is NOT the best color to have on a black background. Some of the yellows and greens make it easier to read. If you use white increase the font size, or go with a bolder style font.
It's a good start, add a bit more pazazz to it, but don't go over board.
