Author Topic: Love letter (Read 380 times)

Udie · « **on:** February 23, 2000, 12:11:00 AM »

To my beloved 190 the dreaded a8
So often you smile when I use you as bate

I keep you real low but never too slow
In hopes that some prey will soon see us below

And when they dive in booming real fast
I know that this fight will not be our last

When I am sure he's diving to fight
I grin and I think gosh what a glorious night

I pull on the stick and move into the vert
waiting OHH waiting to give your cannons a spirt

As we soar up and up and go into the merge
I know that we'll soon kill this foul scurge

We continue our climb and I look back to see
That poor little target has turned in to me

It's now that I know it's time to reverse
I laugh as I realise he's going home in a herse

When I think of us dancing I get such a thrill
So thank you my darling for this wonderful kill

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Udie
Say "you-die", Say "ooodee", JUST SAY YOUR PRAYERS!!!!
902nd Immortal Jaguars

Torque · « **Reply #1 on:** February 23, 2000, 02:05:00 AM »

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Torque · « **Reply #2 on:** February 23, 2000, 02:09:00 AM »

sorry must be manglue on keyboard

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Torque · « **Reply #3 on:** February 23, 2000, 02:10:00 AM »

Torque · « **Reply #4 on:** February 23, 2000, 02:12:00 AM »

Glass of water please.....thx

Torque · « **Reply #5 on:** February 23, 2000, 02:13:00 AM »

Ok here is mine......

BIG
BLUE
HAWG on you

It doesn't have a corkscrew tail
It doesn't move like a snail

When i take her to the skies
I hope that udie soon will die

Amen

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Rude · « **Reply #6 on:** February 23, 2000, 06:32:00 AM »

And mine as well.......

Titled....Pony Food

Oh Yummy
Oh Yummy

Oh Yummy
Oh Yummy

Your Food In My Tummy

Oh Yummy!

Buuuurrrrp!

Thank You!

Rude Out!

RAM · « **Reply #7 on:** February 23, 2000, 06:51:00 AM »

ROTFL!!! LOL!!!
More!!! more!!!!

danish · « **Reply #8 on:** February 23, 2000, 07:07:00 AM »

Sorry guys but Udie is the winner so far,
not just by the unstressed and smooth style but
more so for giving us something that true
poetry allways strive for: the conflict
between what is and what could be.

Ahh I wish I wish that english were my
native language
Id sing you a song
A song of blue skyes and high hopes
of the butcher bird

danish

-sudz- · « **Reply #9 on:** February 23, 2000, 01:53:00 PM »

A haiku (5,7,5) . . .

A dangerous Spit
an otter in air's ocean
a8-ing little fish

-sudz-

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Duckwing6 · « **Reply #10 on:** February 23, 2000, 02:18:00 PM »

another haiku:

a fish(u)ing Wuerger
from above whistling death
hunter gets hunted

<S!>

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Phillip "Duckwing6" Artweger
Flight Officer "E" Flight
Skeleton Crew

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Pongo · « **Reply #11 on:** February 23, 2000, 03:01:00 PM »

Fast and blue
A horrible death
Awaits all below

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Pongo
The Wrecking Crew