It seems this was a lot of help to some people, so I'm going to do my best to keep doing these. I even got someone to help me out with the things I don't know (I'm still learning myself

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If you have a fight that you'd like reviewed then send it to latrobeah2@gmail.com
If it's an ahfilm, then send your head positions as well (found in your Aces High Folder> settings> planes)
If it's avi, or mpeg, or something else from a recording device (like Fraps) then the head positions won't be necessary. (send the ahfilm if you have that as well so I can use external views and flight paths to show stuff if needed)