one more thing is use colorful skins instead of just plain black/white like in the pony. it adds a nice touch. the narration is "echoing" which is in lots of training films.
one more thing is in the lag pursuit film, it would probably sound better if the voice of the pilot added some excitement. something like "i got him, I got him." or my favorite "get some, get some". you know something makes you wish you were the pilot that made the shot, instead of just saying "mmm, that looks cool".
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