Very nice. I liked the edge filter and good use of slo mo. The PIP was interesting, getting 3 different views of a dog fight is pretty cool. I probably would have softened the edges of the two PIPs. There was a really nice PIP layered in at 2.21, I probably would have gone more for that look in the dogfight over water PIPs. The Wildcat vs the 190 is a great scene that really brings out the fact that you can dang near anywhere run into anything, while in anything, while playing the game. Very good end titling. Nice and simple, good speed to it.
Simplicity, control the effects instead of visa-versa. Its been years since I got out of it but Im amazed at the quality of the slo-mo effects of even the entry level NLEs. I liked the black edges filter as well.
Its strange that while I dont think the game looks very good while playing it, I think it often looks good in well edited video.