I have two concerns with this design.
1.
The Allied fleet will have 20mm guns available for defense.
Why do the Allies only have the ability to use manned guns? What makes this worse are the facts that bombing ships is a more difficult task and the Ju 88 is a lesser bomber than a Boston.
Also, can we all just agree that manned guns are lame and should not be allowed in FSO in general?
2.
An example of the target objectives for the event are listed below;
Frame 1
Axis Targets (Shipping 11,9)
Allied Targets (P195, A116, City 12,8)
(2) Cruisers
50 City objects 12,8
(6) Destroyers
VH, FH and Radar @ P195
White Flag town at A116
P195/A116/City 12,8 cluster is so far from the Axis take-off bases that the Allies can realistically attack it before the defenders arrive.
I know this is an example, but based on your poor target selection the last time you designed an FSO, I can't risk letting you potentially make the same error again. But, if you were not planning on ever using the P195/A116/City 12,8 cluster as an allied target, please forgive me.
Just make sure that the targets are placed so that defenders can arrive with reasonable time before any possible attack.