Looking for some Art Critique

[svaalbar]

Been drawing and mixed media messing around. I'd like some critical thoughts - be brutal haha

https://i.imgur.com/EQxI4FW.jpeg

[svaalbar]

Some work in progress work

[Bizman]

Nothing wrong with the drawings, actually there's a couple that I really like. The waterfall picture could be from Hugo Pratt's notebook. But your texting looks similar to a 12 year old having sent a drawing of his favourite cartoon hero to be published on the fan page, bold and clumsy.

[Eagler]

 You forgot the propellers 

Nice drawings!

Eagler

[svaalbar]

Nothing wrong with the drawings, actually there's a couple that I really like. The waterfall picture could be from Hugo Pratt's notebook. But your texting looks similar to a 12 year old having sent a drawing of his favourite cartoon hero to be published on the fan page, bold and clumsy.

Thanks! Some of these are like sticker ideas. I agree with the lettering being really bad. These would be refined in photoshop with an actual font lol

Eagler I have a few bf109s. Prop planes are kind hard to draw compared to the sleek lines of modern fighters