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AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« on: December 08, 2024, 06:39:10 PM »
My attempt at an ad. Unfortunately, I'm struggling to get it below 1 minute, currently at 1:06, it should be closer to 30 sec.
Video will follow, since it will need to be set to te voice-over script.



Any opinions are welcome.

What's kept, what's dropped.
« Last Edit: December 08, 2024, 06:49:16 PM by Animl-AW »

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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #1 on: December 08, 2024, 08:01:17 PM »
I like it. :aok
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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #2 on: December 08, 2024, 08:45:41 PM »
I like it. :aok

thanks

it's a lil wordy. There will be a remake.
mashing it down to 30 secs is a challenge

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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #3 on: December 08, 2024, 10:50:12 PM »
some editing - 1 min


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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #4 on: December 08, 2024, 10:55:13 PM »
Looks good. Are u using Wondershare Filmora to create it? I have made some training films for work with it. Made few Aces High films that bland. Films do help to get prople interested

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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #5 on: December 08, 2024, 11:07:00 PM »
I like it too!  :aok :aok :aok

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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #6 on: December 08, 2024, 11:09:08 PM »
Very informative of the aspects.  Simultaneous action film or photo would add to it.  Good commentary.   :aok

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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #7 on: December 09, 2024, 06:50:22 AM »
This is just the voice-over part to get the timing on 1 min right.  Video clips will be inserted on top of it.

Using Vegas Pro 21 for video compiling.

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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #8 on: December 09, 2024, 07:17:29 AM »
Animal, have you watched/listened to the original commercials that aired on History Channel? Coach (Skip Headen) a former squaddie in The Flying Circus did the voiceovers....you two sound like brothers.  Well done :rock

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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #9 on: December 09, 2024, 07:23:42 AM »
Sounds good Animl-AW!

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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #10 on: December 09, 2024, 08:08:32 AM »
Animal, have you watched/listened to the original commercials that aired on History Channel? Coach (Skip Headen) a former squaddie in The Flying Circus did the voiceovers....you two sound like brothers.  Well done :rock

Ya, like music, the construction concept is based on what I saw/heard already. So it will be similar, but updated visuals. The ones I saw were during AH2.

Basically the script is taken from the web page, which bonds them together.

30 secs is the TV affordable route and it reaches the short attention span, its restrictive on the major points that need to fit in and then get lost in cuts. Even at 1 minute a lot was cut out.  I started at 1:30. Fitting it all in gives me no breaks.

So I’m building video around script rather than vise-versa.

I have doubts, even if it turns out good enough, HTC would afford TV time. But it give something for players to share outside the bubble. Nothing ventured, nothing gained.


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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #11 on: December 10, 2024, 06:42:20 AM »


I have doubts, even if it turns out good enough, HTC would afford TV time. But it give something for players to share outside the bubble. Nothing ventured, nothing gained.

He's stated multiple times that advertising isn't going to happen again.

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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #12 on: December 10, 2024, 07:43:24 AM »
He's stated multiple times that advertising isn't going to happen again.

True, but the rest of us could post a good commercial every where we can to spread the news.

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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #13 on: December 10, 2024, 10:15:46 AM »
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Re: AH3 Ad voice-over draft
« Reply #14 on: December 10, 2024, 10:55:55 AM »
He's stated multiple times that advertising isn't going to happen again.

Yes, I’m aware.
I musta looked at 500 on YT videos last night. Very few had more that 300 views over 7 yrs. Even on HTC YT page. Either google, like YT put most visited sights on top. Just sitting there probably hasn’t done much. There has to be an easy 10k vids out there.

Between HTC site and YT MotA has gotten almost 1,400 views, about 15-30 per day. But that video tells more about one scenario, not the aspects of the game. Many of those views are current players. I don’t think it reaches outside the bubble enough, its long.

I absolutely don’t think it will make earth spin backwards. However, when we were working on numbers prior to MotA, these guys posting on other sites brought in 40-60 players, return or new. We didn’t have much of anything fresh for them to use. But when MotA was over and the effort dropped so did numbers as we weren’t getting replacement numbers. Or they didn’t look far for material and most, including mine, are too long for short attention spans some sites hold. Those efforts, without tv, got us up from 112-120 to 160-200 without an ad vid.

This isn’t taking much effort or time. If it can get 2k views and 20 players it was worth the time. If we can get those on bbs and 200 to keep drama low while/if we get players it would also help.

Lets cut to it, its not going to drag in 2k players. But If it can help get us back to 160-200 it would get it in the right direction again. We hut a bad road that disrupted our momentum with the YKW and a sim selling on our boards and other crap. I want 250 in the MA. Its a reasonable goal.

Again, nothing ventured, nothing gained. <shrug> I might have a few hours into it. MotA was over 100 hrs, because of 30 hrs of films to go through.

Even if it were to get used by HTC, which I doubt, its 100% royalty free.