It was a good article, and interesting to see what you emphasized. Personally, I was dying to hear the part of the story I'd only had in fragments: the intel efforts the cadets used, the way the command structure functioned in the chaotic environment of a frame and how it was adjusted from frame to frame to be more effective, and so on. I also thought that the low turnout of frame four could have been justified less along the lines of "dead pilots" and more in terms of one of the more underrated aspects of these multiframe scenarios: unit morale. Part of the fun of these things is keeping the interest level of the participants up. While certainly going AWOL isn't as prevalent IRL, there certainly is in my mind a good analogy between non-attendance late in frames and units with broken morale having little combat effectiveness.
Anyway, great read, nice to see it get some circulation, and nothing would please me more than to take place in a similar event in the future.