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Offline JoeDirt

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« on: October 23, 2002, 04:54:42 PM »
i like to watch action scenes in my mind alot when im listaning to techno at night.

so last night i found out that this dude that i said i would loan my camcorder to, was tryin to play a trick on me. so i found out and told him he could forget using it for his little movie.


so that night when i was in bed, i thot of this scene...what i thot he might do, and what i might do after what he might do.

this morning during geometry i wrote it out.



'...I had just told Darvon that he could not use my camcorder because of some prank he tried to pull last night....


when i woke up i turned on the coffee then put on some pants to go outside and get the morning paper.....
when i came out i heard the car turn on. I didnt think ANYthing of it...walking down the drive way i see an old 80's car, a baby blue celebrity, up the street about 3 houses down slowly driveing into the neighborhood. The tinted window slowly rolled down just before it got to the drive way. then i see black thing....a barrel kindof... "A GUN!!" just before it flashes i drop to the ground, glass from the car that i was beside was falling all over, the car sped off into the neighborhood so i ran in to get my super cool ninja sais. When i got back out, i saw the car speeding back to get out of the hood. I quickly ran and hid behind a tree next to the street. Just before he passes i jumped to the side of the tree, revealing myself to the unknown AssAssin, threw my sai at the drivers side of the windsheld. Spooked, the AssAssin flew by and swerved into a tree. I took my extra sai from the back of my belt, ran over to the idiot AssAssin and riped the door off with my super cool streingth. To my surprize, under the blody face, I see darvon with alook of horror trying to wiggle out of his seat away from me...being so pissed, i riped him from his seat belt, punched him in the face, stabed him in the chest with my super cool sai, took his UZI and said to him in a deep dark voice "Next time you try to shoot some one, i hope you'll remember this pain" with that, i shot him in the legs. "have a nice day!" i hapily said, walking off with my bloody sai to retreave my morning paper paper'

Offline Sandman

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« Reply #1 on: October 23, 2002, 05:14:47 PM »
See... get rid of the porn and then you lose focus and your mind drifts... :D
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Offline john9001

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« Reply #2 on: October 23, 2002, 05:36:11 PM »
joe dirt is a nobel luareaut in litterature

Offline loser

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« Reply #3 on: October 23, 2002, 06:00:32 PM »
ROFLMAO   :    "Darvon is a moron"

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« Reply #4 on: October 23, 2002, 08:12:37 PM »
Darvon??
is he aware his parents named him after a narcotic??

Offline JoeDirt

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« Reply #5 on: October 23, 2002, 08:47:39 PM »


the original name is Darby. my mom joked once with the name darvon so...

Offline DA98

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« Reply #6 on: October 23, 2002, 10:25:14 PM »
You should add a last scene where you wail on your guitar really really hard!!! This would be cool, and by cool, I mean totally sweet!!!

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« Reply #7 on: October 24, 2002, 08:40:26 AM »
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Originally posted by DA98
You should add a last scene where you wail on your guitar really really hard!!! This would be cool, and by cool, I mean totally sweet!!!


Ultimate Power?

Did somebody say ninjas?