Bosco, I watched the 1st 8 min or so...
1) The setup and shot on the zeke was outstanding, thats the type of clip I'd cut that out and post it, almost a batfink caliber reverse.
2) No question your upping from a capped field and getting offensive and into the flow so there is some value overall...
however let me make the following observations from a former trainers perspective.
A) You get target fixated very easily, the F4U was obviously a new kid on the block, you had him in zoom forever with no SA update
B) You easily got sucked into a furball where you were defensive and ineffective. The one timer on racdog(?) was nice but just that...
C) You took fire early due to poor SA and a lack of maneuvering
D) You got bogged down into a fight beyond your ability to manage with minimal SA by the 6 min mark from a well established position after you took care of the zeke...
I think your intent and effort should be applauded and encouraged, what you need to contemplate (IMO) is exactly what your goal is when you post a film here. Ideally the clip will have a single focal point that another pilot can apply, thats why most clips are edited to a single segment of a longer flight/fight. No question you've got tremendous potential and a genuine desire to both improve and help others.
Lets try and put your clip in context with mine from the perspective of a newer player looking for info and advice. My intent was to show the realities of air combat in a multi player setting. "Dog fighting" was not a historic reality and if your attempting to "fly to live" its not really relevant unless your forced into it. Ideally you'd just bounce the unwary and go home, well in a game its somewhat unrealistic but you can maintain speed, awareness and operational control of your immediate surroundings. Now this clip was an actual training sortie, its intent was to help lay a foundation so that the player in question could progress beyond it and begin to apply the stuff he really wants me to teach him.
So we have a film that shows that very little true ACM is required to be an "ace". Any pilot in the game with 60 days of experience can take that clip and apply it to obtain a 20/1 or better K/D ratio within 90 days (if you don't die of boredom first). That does not mean the clip you posted doesn't have value but it also has areas of potential confusion and questionable tactical choices. 95% of what I film is unsuitable for the very same reasons. The simple truth is most of the time I fly stupid and have fun, for someone looking to learn emulating that isn't productive.
There is a reason that the training corps has to be so selective, its not what your trying to teach or capable of teaching that limits you. It's what you unintentionally communicate that has the potential for harm. I think that if you have a genuine interest the raw ability is certainly their, but the learning curve involved in learning to teach is often tougher then learning to do