Read it and tell me what you guys think please. Good or bad i'd just like feedback.
One passionate voice,
Can lead a nation to a path full of choice,
Can end a world of war and greed,
Can end the worry of millions of what to feed,
Their sons and daughters during the night,
One voice can lead a world in this fight.
One voice can fuel the fire in the heart,
Let two find the way for love to start,
Or let a child live to cherish the beauty around us,
And let it have possibilities to learn to trust,
Let the lusting realize the act of compassion,
While the sloth can be put into action.
It can free a human from their wrong acts,
And let the ignorant see the truth of facts.
It can unite a whole nation in equality,
Or let others see one person’s true quality.
One voice can end suffering and one’s pain,
And let a poor man see what life he can gain.
A single voice can do all of this,
It can counter another’s anger and iron fist,
Do you have this passion? Do you have that voice?
Can you save a person from the wrongdoing of a single choice?
If this is too opinionated please let me know. I only posted on the forums because i believe it isn't. <S>
