If I might make another suggestion - change the font of the "First Of The Few" text. It looks like the Arial font to me - which is fine for typesetting, but too perfect to represent hand lettering on the side of a cowl, IMO.
MS Comic Sans is a possibility here, but I'd suggest searching for free fonts looking for "Hand lettering" or "Hand printing" styles. You might find something the varies in weight and even stroke angle between letters that would look less perfect and machine-like. Subtle inconsistencies and imperfections are key.
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