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Offline Schaden

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« Reply #15 on: May 02, 2005, 05:29:51 PM »
Nice skin, hope we'll see all the JG44 skins.

Offline Cobra412

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« Reply #16 on: May 03, 2005, 02:07:49 PM »
Edbert it looks great. I see a few things. The number 1 on the side is in the wrong style font. You may actually need to make the font for that.

The German symbol is generally wrong. The insignia should be slightly lower than center on the compartment door and it needs to be alot wider, needs more bulk to it.

The wings have too many white lines. The 9th line towards the end of the wing needs to go. There were only a total of 8 lines on the wing assembly itself and 2 more on the main fuselage. Also the horizontal stabs are missing a line. There should be a total of 3 lines on them.  

The symbol below the canopy line may actually be out of scale too. Looks like it needs to be slightly larger.

Also the yellow spinner is slightly larger than it should be. There should be a very distinguishable gap between the blades and where the yellow on the spinner starts.

Offline moot

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« Reply #17 on: May 04, 2005, 08:08:38 AM »
Pretty good.
The top of the wings' rivet and paneling look a bit heavy, the fuselage's are definitely too bold.
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Offline Edbert1

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« Reply #18 on: May 06, 2005, 09:50:46 AM »
Okay, edited the following list (appreciate the feedback!):

Slogan changed to correct speeelign problem.

Exhaust stains placed under supercharger intake, and generally "browned" up a bit.

ALL rivets and most panel lines are toned WAY down, the ones on the underside to a lesser extent since the dark red masks them.

Font corrected on the "1", you were right, I had to make my own...aaarrrgh!

Side insignia corrected and relocated (why did they put early war style cross on a 1945 plane?).

Size of yellow on spinner altered.

Here's some screenies:





I'll recompile the submission if you think it is ready.

Offline JB73

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« Reply #19 on: May 06, 2005, 10:04:34 AM »
looks great !!!
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Offline SkyChimp

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« Reply #20 on: May 06, 2005, 10:19:21 AM »
<<<< Don't like belly much sry looks great tho Sir