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Offline Nr_RaVeN

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« on: December 18, 2005, 09:05:38 AM »
Never did a pony before, I'm still working out some bugs. Here's what I have so far.
I'm remaking the markings from scratch, almost done
.Miss Marilyn ll .55th FG 343rd










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« Reply #1 on: December 18, 2005, 09:21:29 AM »
Sweet! turn panel lines down a bit and she is absolutley a beut! to bad 51 slots are full
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« Reply #2 on: December 18, 2005, 02:20:26 PM »
ty sir
Were do you find out what Slots are taken for each AC??
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« Reply #3 on: December 18, 2005, 02:36:01 PM »
just heard around? anyone. well I hope they are not cause that would def. become my main 51 skin.
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« Reply #4 on: December 18, 2005, 03:45:47 PM »
Pyro or Skuzzy (one of the two) mentioned P51s were full last time we got a skins pack. Keep submitting, however, as they MAY rotate skins in and out.
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« Reply #5 on: December 18, 2005, 03:57:45 PM »
b e a u tiful raven:O :O :O :O :O :O :O :O :O
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« Reply #6 on: December 18, 2005, 07:18:43 PM »
tone down panel lines a lil bit and pls.... make et DIRTIER! :D
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« Reply #7 on: December 18, 2005, 08:19:29 PM »
A few things.

The fusalage stars are too small.

The Squadron/Plane code on the right side is wrong, the CY goes in front of the star.

The red nostep lines are in the wrong place on the wings.

You are missing the gun bay access handles on the right wing.

I believe that the underwing lights are on the wrong wing.

The horse on the rudder is a might too small, check it against photos.

These are all detail items, looking good though :aok
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« Reply #8 on: December 18, 2005, 09:12:55 PM »
Agreed with above and Ill add one more thing.

The red stripe separating the camo and metal is too wide.  Thin it up a bit and it should be better.

Absolutely great work!
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« Reply #9 on: December 18, 2005, 10:34:58 PM »
Ty for input
more weather,  lower ops on Panel lines, and Thin down the red stripe.... All good calls. going to ajust the stars ect and some of the detail things too ty for that info.




almost done  Thanks Guys
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« Reply #10 on: December 19, 2005, 12:12:06 AM »
Agreed with Fencer's comments.  Codes and star and bar too small.  Underwing hard point were not zinc chromate color either.  Should be silver.

And when you've finished this one, do a B model to go with it :)

A couple of 55th FG profiles with the same scheme.


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« Reply #11 on: December 19, 2005, 12:54:03 AM »
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Agreed with Fencer's comments.  Codes and star and bar too small.  Underwing hard point were not zinc chromate color either.  Should be silver.

And when you've finished this one, do a B model to go with it :)

A couple of 55th FG profiles with the same scheme.





<-was planing on doing that b guppy =)

Nice skin id say tune down the blue just a tad at most 3-5% =)
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« Reply #12 on: December 19, 2005, 08:13:58 AM »
Thank you guys for the detailing info
Also thanks Guppy35 for taking the time to post the Larger profiles ..I need Books ;)

I also noticed a few more things upon looking into it a bit closer .

the bottom of the canopy is aluminum.
the elevators are green also.  not aluminum as I have them
and the hard points under wing ARE silver.

 





there is some writing on the left side just infront of the canopy looks like warnings or something what does it say and were do I get that?

A few more details and shes done Thanks
~S~ Rave
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« Reply #13 on: December 19, 2005, 11:20:18 AM »
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<-was planing on doing that b guppy =)

Nice skin id say tune down the blue just a tad at most 3-5% =)


SkyChimp, you seem to be "going to do" alot, but I never see you post any updates.

And you never responded to me on the Clostermann Spitfire thread, so speak now or risk duplication, I am starting MH526 this week.
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« Reply #14 on: December 19, 2005, 01:39:30 PM »
the only thing i can add is that maybe the panel lines should be antialiased?? the lines at the moment do the whole pixelated line break effect thingy, if you know what i mean, just like diagonal lines drawn in paint look
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