As you all may have noticed, it was 3 in the morning when I wrote this (eastern time).
I like it though, and I think it is one of my better peaces. When this really happened though I was in a corsair and not a 109, but I said 109 to add to the immersion.
Also I only managed to shoot down the 24 and vulch him 2 more times. But this story sounds like something an old pilot that is not in it for the fight would sound like.