Ooo no just loves the whine an chesse . just fly Bish airlines keeps in good standed with all . This happlys all the time seen a week ago when a Nit took over a cv the bish had an sail it rite back to there port got sunk end of story.

The 'Ooo' suggests more a sensuous pleasure rather than surprise or emphasis.
There's an attractive symetry to ' . '.
I kind of like 'happlys'; it suggests an imposed haplessness.
'all the time seen a week ago' ...awake all the time? ...couldn't stop looking?
'when a Nit took over a cv the bish had' [sic] (the bish had already took over?)
'there port' adds a kind of whimsical charm to direction finding. ..."I went to there corner to buy some candy and got lost before returning to my there house." etc.
The 'sunk end of story' ...I prefer the happier uplifting end of story.