Hmmm. You didn't chop them up screens up very well Vulcan, splicing them together for nice cohesion to capture the moment of foolishness would have better presentation.
Although the mood was captured, it wasn’t nearly as well executed, as say Thunder could have done. Not bad, but it must be considered in any award winning BBS composition.
Again, reviewing the capture, a true master would start the capture as to edit out a personal “HEHE” comment, as that is as a nono in BBS banter, as much as “Maverick” is to callsign choices. Not your fault, but a 1.5 point deduction for overall bastardly presentation. We don’t want to show we actually converse with such Barry Gibb impressionists when publicly trying to be a out right salamander to open channel offenders/fools.
“Tardling” was used out of context as well diminishing the gangbang of wits of channel 1. When using the sacred “T” word, or derivatives of it, you must wait for the optimum moment. Again, not your fault, but not a good reply to a gem like “noodlesmokers.” One word comebacks like “Fool” would have been more cutting and to the point without giving the subject a window to respond. You can’t choose your channel one banter bastard mates, so no point deduction I guess.
However, I’ll give you 2 points Entertainment Thread category for Kbman sounding like a long lost woman, and MaxQ’s special HO whine. A nice addition to a well captured banter submission.
Overall entertaining, but I’m afraid you did not win first prize.
Not to undermine this exceptional effort, you ARE getting a old bowling 5th place trophy from the attic I pried off the inscription plate, and wrote in “ Vulcan, 6th Place, Opportunistic Screen Capture Category 2001” in magic marker.
CONCLUSION
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Heading-5
Purpose – 9
Presentation – 5
Entertainment – 7.5
Bastard Factor – 8.5
Total thread Quality- 7
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Total- 7.0 (better check that math Gunman52, 42, whatever)
Overall, not bad.
