No offense but there are elements that question your version.
Originally posted by Serenity
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They get down there
Why write this in the third person?
Maybe you're describing an event gone over in your mind, not in actuality?
Originally posted by Serenity snip- and shook my hand. I returned the hand shake, taking my hand off of my knife for a crucial second. As soon as our hands parted
What!!??
If they were truly out to mug you, he'd of never let go of your hand and just strong arm you into submission. Remember, you're just a 15 y.o. and rather small/light in stature compared to them. The other one would of been on you like glue as well.
To let you go would invite the possibility that you might be armed and allow you to grab your gun (they don't know you or what you might be carrying).
Originally posted by Serenity he threw the first blow, connecting clearly with the right side of my face. Surprised me, as I wasnt expecting it QUITE then, but I wasn't hurt.
Guess what? You would still show swelling of the soft tissue covering your cheek 'solid-bone' area. You'd be feeling the pain from the swelling by the time you wrote the account the 'next morning'.
Originally posted by Serenity
In under a second I had my knife out, extended, and within centimeters of his throaght. I was ready to deliver a lethal blow, and would enjoy it SO much. But then my concience kicked in. "You want to get into the Air Force Academy! This MIGHT be self defence, but if it is considered excessive force, you will NEVER get in!"
Wait a minute, what training have you had in knife fighting?
Why not cut the guy in the arm?
Even big guys don't like getting cut nor the resulting pain.
You took Judo, right?
Why didn't you just drop the first guy? Judo teaches throws, grappling, and submission.
Originally posted by Serenity So, I retracted the knife, and attempted a retreat from the fight, knowing that while I would have NO problems leaving them both unconcious, I might just get annoyed enough to USE the knife.
Wait a minute...you bring a knife and get ready to use it, only in the middle of being attacked by two larger guys (remember you can't predict the future so you don't know what the second guy is going to do), you have the presence of mind to retract the blade and put it away??!!
Why didn't you just warn them by flashing the knife around and also warn them your prowess with your knife fighting skills and your Judo?
Remember the Air Force Academy!
Originally posted by Serenity With the knife safely back in my pocket I made my retreat. As I attempted to, he put another blow to my face.
LOL, in the middle of a fight, you're interested in putting your knife away?
You made your retreat? Where was this big guy attacking you at the time?
You call a time out?
Originally posted by Serenity Again, no pain. This guy was pretty stupid, he didnt realise that punching a guy in the cheeck would cause no pain, as it connects only with bone. I actually laughed in his face at this point, and again made a retreat. They thought to themselves "We've got a 15 year old, 140lb white kid here, late at night. Don't let him go, he should be EASY to take down". They were wrong. I looked over my left shoulder just in time to take a blow to the left cheeck, which knocked me forward over the railing in front of me. I realised I was now in a favorable position. With ever bit of strength I could muster, I launched my right foot back and connected solidly with his chest. Id swear I felt a rib crack, and he fell backwards over the bus stop bench and didnt get up.
No, it connects with soft tissue supported by bone. No swelling or pain the next day?
LOL, you laughed in his face...in a middle of an attack...by yourself. RIIIIGGHHHTTT.
Where'd you learn that kicking prowess? Not from Judo.
Originally posted by Serenity The second guy was just now joining the fight, and once more, I had my knife out, ready to strike. A quick slash to his throaght, and plunge it into his back... he'll be no concern and it will be so much fun! But once more, my concience kicked in. "Even if IT self-defense, you will still have killed two people" (If I had stabbed them, they WOULD die. Without question.) "And the Air Force Academy will STILL see that!" So, once more, I begrudgingly closed my blade and returned it to my pocket.
Wait a minute, in the middle of the second guy joining the attack, you were able to reach into your pocket, extend the blade (so he didn't see that too?), you have a conscience 'moment', you then closed the blade and returned it in your pocket...in the middle of an attack...and he didn't strike you?
What happened to your Judo training in all of this? Your 140 pound frame could throw both of them individually.
Originally posted by Serenity
snip- They got away with my homework, (I'm serious!) and the Algebra II book I needed to study for a test today
Ahh now we can see the possible motives for the 'event'.
1) Messing around and not finish your homework and study for your Algebra II test?
2) Maybe you and your girlfriend did something more than you should, and this is the cover story. (explains not doing your homework and test study)
3) You, like a lot of young ones, just made something up for 'acceptance' from the 'group'.
THAT would make sense the story and your not fessing up to it.
