I haven't read all the discussion so far but I can only assume it's full of "I had to do it when I was a kid, you should have to, too." Changing things like this is very difficult because sometimes there is a fine line between doing what is best for our children and weakening our children. One of our city high schools recently approved the purchase of iPads for students to use instead of some textbooks. There were plenty who felt they shouldn't because when they were in school, they had to haul around books.
From an academic standpoint, here's what I see wrong with your paper:
-Extensive use of one source, this NSF website. You are citing research that they cite in their article, rather than simply citing the article itself. The NSF has an agenda, although it may be a noble one, it still leads them to choose how to interpret the data. I though I saw that you maybe had read her paper, well, you should be able to just cite it instead.
-Some of the data from Carskadon is 30+ years old. That doesn't necessarily mean it is bad data, but you can become less able to generalize data from that long ago. Some is more recent, but even most of the NSF data is simply citing Carskadon.
-I don't know how they do it now, but I could never, ever, cite Wiki for a paper. Wiki is a good resource for starting out, and usually link to real data, but shouldn't be used as a source. For example, you biological clock .png file was done by user YassineMrabet; can you tell me the academic credentials or YassineMrabet and why I should trust him/her?
-The references are suppose to be a way for someone to go and look at the data you looked at. Sometimes that was just impossible to do; what is up with citation #6, just a quote?
My main point is that although the point has some validity, how can anyone believe it if we can't trust the data? I don't know what resources your school has, but if you have access to PSYCINFO, you will have access to thousands of real empirical articles on sleep.
P.S. No one is going to profit off your paper...